14 Writing the Body: Hands – Writing Exercise
Authors: Anastacia-Reneé, Teri Ellen Cross Davis, Shauna M. Morgan
Target Group: High School, Undergraduate
Poem:
Safiya Sinclair, “Hands” (Furious Flower 2019, pp. 305-306)
Description:
This generative writing exercise asks students/writers to read and analyze Safiya Sinclair’s poem “Hands” and then compose their own poem featuring hands and an engagement with the five senses and landscape. Landscape is defined as the writer’s environment, be it urban, suburban, or rural. Other prompts or areas to explore in the poem can include physiology, anatomy, the palm, the fingers and thumb, fingernails, etc.
Learning Objectives:
Students will hone their analytical skills by engaging, interrogating, and examining Safiya Sinclair’s “Hands” to deepen their level of observation and comprehension. Using the poem as a foundation and inspiration, students will create one original poem and expand their use of poetic devices.
Instructions:
- Read Safiya Sinclair’s “Hands” and note your first impressions of the poem.
- Identify all the places where hands appear or are referenced.
- Draft your own “hands” poem considering the following questions:
- Who do these hands belong to?
- What do the hands feel, see, taste, hear, smell?
- What do these hands say and/or experience?
- Where do the hands go? Where do we see them in the landscape of the poem?
Supplemental Activities:
- Listen to Bill Withers’ “Grandma’s Hands” and explore connections with the poem.
- Have students spend three minutes looking at and tracing their own hands.
- Review the anatomy of the hand.
- View Jacob Lawrence’s The Shoemaker and incorporate a lesson on ekphrasis.